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研究生: 林敬恩
Lin, Jing-En
論文名稱: 臺灣EFL學生英文學測佳作之主題發展模式分析
An Analysis on Thematic Progression Patterns in Exemplar English Essays by Taiwanese EFL Students on the General Scholastic Ability Test
指導教授: 鍾曉芳
Chung, Siaw-Fong
口試委員: 洪媽益
Michael Tanangkingsing
尤雪瑛
Yu, Hsueh-Ying
學位類別: 碩士
Master
系所名稱: 外國語文學院 - 英語教學碩士在職專班
The Master of Arts in English Teaching
論文出版年: 2026
畢業學年度: 114
語文別: 英文
論文頁數: 176
中文關鍵詞: 主題推進主題銜接EFL寫作
外文關鍵詞: thematic progression, thematic linkage, EFL writing
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  • 本研究旨在探討臺灣EFL學生於大學入學學科能力測驗英文寫作佳作中所使用的主題銜接(thematic linkage, TL)類型與主題推進(thematic progression, TP)模式。本研究提出兩項研究問題:一、佳作中各類TL的分布情形為何,不同TL類型如何組合運用?二、佳作中各類TL的分布情形為何,不同TL類型如何組合運用?研究語料取自大考中心公布之112至113學年度學測英文寫作佳作,共計29段說明文段落,採混合研究方法,結合量化統計與質性分析進行探討。
    量化結果顯示,持續推進(Continuous TP)與線性推進(Simple linear TP)為最主要的TP類型,合計逾94%。詞彙重複(exact repetition)為最常見的TL類型,且上下義詞(hypernym/hyponym)與超主題推進(Hyper-Theme TP)及分裂述位推進(split Rheme TP)具顯著相關。質性分析則發現,程度較高之EFL學生能運用巢狀推進(nested TP)與多重主題銜接(multiple TL)撰寫層次化段落結構此外。TP分布分析顯示,全新主題(brand-new Theme)占相鄰句對之29%。進一步的質性分析顯示,近半數的全新主題確實造成段落連貫性的中斷,但其餘則具備結構邊界標記與語態轉換標記兩種修辭功能,顯示全新主題的出現並不一致地代表連貫性的破壞。
    本研究結果對臺灣高中英語寫作教學具有實務上的意義。教師可引導學生留意句子間的主題流動,協助學生理解TP可作為組織想法、提升連貫性之工具。學生應被引導辨識主位與述位,並分析TP模式。TP可作為提升學生寫作篇章連貫性與凝聚力之鷹架策略。未來研究可嘗試以更大規模的語料庫驗證此研究結果,或比較程度較高之EFL學生與英語母語者所使用之TP模式,以獲得更具通則化之研究結果。


    This study investigates the thematic linkage (TL) types and thematic progression (TP) patterns employed in exemplar English essays produced by Taiwanese EFL students for the guided writing section of the General Scholastic Ability Test (GSAT). Two research questions guide this study: (1) What are the distributions of each type of TL employed in the Taiwanese students’ exemplar expository writing from the GSAT and how do different types of TL occur in combination? (2) What are the distributions of each type of TP employed in the Taiwanese students’ exemplar expository writing from the GSAT and how do different types of TP occur in combination? The corpus comprises 29 exemplar expository paragraphs drawn from GSAT school years 112 and 113 published by the College Entrance Examination Center (CEEC). A mixed-methods approach combining quantitative and qualitative analyses was adopted.
    The quantitative results reveal that Continuous TP and Simple linear TP are the dominant TP types, together accounting for over 94% of all TP occurrences. Exact repetition is the most frequent TL type, and hypernym/hyponym is found to be significantly associated with Hyper-Theme TP and split Rheme TP. The qualitative analyses further demonstrate that advanced EFL students can construct hierarchically organized paragraphs through nested TP and multiple TL. In addition, the analysis of TP distributions revealed that brand-new Themes accounted for 29% of adjacent sentence pairs. Further qualitative analysis showed that nearly half of the brand-new Themes impaired paragraph coherence, while the remainder served the rhetorical functions of structural boundary markers and voice shift markers, indicating that brand-new Themes do not uniformly signal a breakdown in coherence.
    The findings carry practical implications for English writing instruction in Taiwanese senior high schools. Teachers can draw the student’s attention to the thematic flow between sentences and help them see how TP can serve as a tool for organizing ideas cohesively. Students should be guided to identify Theme and Rheme and analyze TP patterns. TP can be a scaffolding strategy to improve textual coherence and cohesion in student’s writing. Future research may seek to prove these findings with larger corpora or compare the TP patterns employed by advanced EFL students with those produced by native English speakers to produce more generalizable results.

    Acknowledgements iv
    Chinese Abstract v
    English Abstract vii
    Chapter 1: Introduction 1
    1.1 Background and Motivation 1
    1.2 Research Questions 7
    Chapter Two: Literature Review 9
    2.1 Theoretical Foundations of TR and TP 9
    2.1.1 Theme and Rheme 9
    2.1.2 Thematic Progression Types 11
    2.1.3 Thematic Linkage Types 17
    2.2 TP Use in EFL Student Writing and Proficiency Differences 29
    2.3 TL Use in EFL Student Writing 35
    2.4 Application of TP in Teaching 39
    Chapter Three: Methodology 45
    3.1 The Corpus and the Writing Task 45
    3.2 Coding Scheme 47
    3.3 Definition of the Analytical Units 55
    3.4 The Agreement of the Two Raters 61
    3.5 Data Analysis 63
    3.5.1 Quantitative Analysis 63
    3.5.2 Qualitative Analysis 80
    Chapter Four: Results and Discussion 83
    4.1 Quantitative Results 83
    4.1.1 The Distributions of TL and TP Types 83
    4.1.2 Correlation between TL Types and TP Types 94
    4.2 Qualitative Results 97
    4.2.1 Nested TP 99
    4.2.2 Multiple TL 107
    4.2.3 Brand-new Theme 114
    Chapter Five: Conclusion 121
    5.1 Summary of Findings 121
    5.2 Pedagogical Implications 124
    5.3 Limitations 125
    5.4 Suggestions for Future Research 127
    Reference 130
    Appendixes 136
    Appendix A: GSAT Guided Writing Task Instructions 136
    Appendix B: Samples of Complete Writings and the Coding 137
    Sample 1: (11208/I) 137
    Sample 2: (11309/I) 140
    Sample 3: (11301/II) 143
    Appendix C: Complete Texts of All Paragraphs Discussed in This Study 146
    Essay 11202/I 146
    Essay 11301/I 149
    Essay 11302/I 152
    Essay 11302/II 156
    Essay 11304/I 159
    Essay 11306/I 163
    Essay 11307/I 166
    Essay 11307/II 169
    Essay 11308/II 172

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